IWSG October 2024

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October 2 question – Ghost stories fit right in during this month. What’s your favorite classic ghostly tale? Tell us about it and why it sends chills up your spine.

It isn’t a classic, but I read it in middle school(?).

I can’t even remember the title, but it’s a medieval/pioneer setting and there’s a village being terrorized by some night creature killing people and livestock by punching a hole into the victim’s throat, then ravaging the body. Community meetings and various folks go out to try and catch the critter, only to fail. Two young men have to take a shift because it’s their household’s turn. One is attacked in the night, but before the creature can kill him, his brother swoops in and severs the creature’s hand at the wrist. The creature shrieks, runs away. The hand is left behind as some dried, gnarly bloody thing. The victim’s brother takes him home. The family fusses over the injuries and bruising on the survivors neck as the brothers tell the story about an impossibly fast and strong critter they couldn’t see because of the dark.

No one notices tiny grandma quietly coming in to sit in her rocker, hiding the roughly bandaged bloody stump of her arm under her shawl.

Story ends right there.

Why wouldn’t this freak someone out? Is she demented? Is she actually a monster in disguise? Is it some witch-thing to prolong her life? Did she know her grandsons were on shift that night? Did she even care? Is it actually the plan to kill her family?

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, GODDAMMIT!?!?!???

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4 responses to “IWSG October 2024”

  1. Esther O'Neill Avatar

    Did she say ‘Tis but a scratch ? ‘ ‘

    Last month, sunlit early evening, I found a severed head on the track outside

    our house. Used to know him wel;l.

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  2. natalieiaguirre7 Avatar
    natalieiaguirre7

    This would freak me out too. It’s interesting that you can remember the story so vividly but not the title.

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  3. alohagmb13 Avatar
    alohagmb13

    That is one spooky story with a great ending! Leaves so much to the imagination and offers plenty of fodder for an author’s thirsty mind.

    My all-time favs are the chicken skin tales of marching spirits and ghostly appearances in Hawaii.

    https://gail-baugniet.blogspot.com

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  4. Shannon Lawrence Avatar
    Shannon Lawrence

    I remember a similar story! I believe it was in an anthology of scary stories for kids, but don’t remember what it was called.

    http://thewarriormuse.com

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